Rabu, 05 Oktober 2016

1.       Plan your composition about an appropriate career for your patner
A.      Finish the sentence about your patner
I think Arrizky would make a good Military
B.      In the chart below, write threem reasons why you think so and some supporting points for each.

Paraghraph 2
Paraghraph 3
Paraghraph 4
Main idea
Next career
The point
opportunity




Supporting point(s)
and than Patriotism, defending our nation, and a sense of duty. Military service is a time-honored way to serve others first. 
You can be sure of one thing. Choosing a military career is a big decision

You will also gain leadership skills and a work ethic that can only come with a background in the military


C.      Now write a short introductory paraghraph, like the first paraghraph in part 6.
arrizky believe people join the military for different reasons. joined for several reasons : there's a sense of honor serving your nation,love of country, sense of duty, patriotism, free healthcare, travel, in trouble with the law, to make parents proud, get away from a small town, and there are hundreds of reasons.
and than Patriotism, defending our nation, and a sense of duty. Military service is a time-honored way to serve others first. Leadership opportunities. Military leadership is a great way to get your resume on top of the pile for your next career.
2.    Write the topic sentence for each on your main ideas.
a.    arrizky believe people join the military for different reasons
b.    Military service is a time-honored way to serve others first
c.    You will be given hands-on training, and you will be expected to carry more responsibility than you would starting out in a comparable civilian job.

3.    Final, on a separate piece of paper, put the parts together and write a composition. Underline the topic sentence in each paraghraph.
arrizky believe people join the military for different reasons. joined for several reasons : there's a sense of honor serving your nation,love of country, sense of duty, patriotism, free healthcare, travel, in trouble with the law, to make parents proud, get away from a small town, and there are hundreds of reasons.
and than Patriotism, defending our nation, and a sense of duty. Military service is a time-honored way to serve others first. Leadership opportunities. Military leadership is a great way to get your resume on top of the pile for your next career.
You can be sure of one thing. Choosing a military career is a big decision. It will have a major effect on your life. Unlike choosing any other career or job:

      i.        Once you are in the military you cannot change your mind and quit, without serious consequences
    ii.        You are legally committing yourself to this career for several years  and
   iii.        You are choosing a career which may require you to harm other people and risk your own life.
   iv.        How should you make a decision that is this important? One that you won't regret? Thanks to science, we know the steps to take to make a good decision.
No matter which career path you choose, the experience you receive in the Army will give you a framework for success.
You will have the opportunity to train and achieve a certification in almost any career path. You will be given hands-on training, and you will be expected to carry more responsibility than you would starting out in a comparable civilian job. You will also gain leadership skills and a work ethic that can only come with a background in the military. Explore hundreds of career paths in the  Army and find the job that's right.
4.    Think of a title and write it at the top of your paper
ARMY CAREERS
5.    When you finish,complete this checklist.
Writing checklist
o   Are you reasons supported with details ?  ( true )
o   Do you have clear topic sentences for each paraghrap ? ( true )
o   Do you have transition word to start paraghraphs 2,3 and 4 ? ( true )
o   Does your title fit your compostion ? ( true )









5 komentar:

  1. Wow Hafiz! You are so detailed in writing it! Big willingness!

    BalasHapus
  2. Hello Haviz,
    it's a good paragraph because it's understandable. Here is my suggestion. I think 'arrizky believe people join the military for different reasons' should be 'arrizky believes'. Thank you. :)

    BalasHapus
  3. Hi Haviz you should give attention to capital alphabet for name. Every name should writen by capital alphabet

    BalasHapus